Saturday, November 8, 2008

Artistic Heart Attack

I was not expecting a comment on my blog for at least 6 months till I establish myself in the blogosphere. But handful of my friends gave me regular comments which made me want to write more.
Yesterday night ... I was thinking of the agony of a blogger waiting for his first comment and my 'Creative Juices' started to flow. I tried peeing four times in 1 hour ... but the 'Creative Juices' didnt stop flowing !!

Here is the child of my 'Creative Juices' ...


why...ohh why ... no comment !!
For it just takes a moment
Are ur hearts made of cement
making all of you dormant
my thots fly off on a tangent
causing my anger to ferment




Hhhooo...enthoru aashwasam...( What a relief !! )

It a big relief to get rid of that 'Artistic Heart Attack ' ( loosely translated as "Kalaakarante Hridaya vedana" )

12 comments:

silverine said...

lol!! Whatay poem!! Will nominate your poem for the Nobel if you nominate mine! :p

Reg comments, after a point people stop commenting and just read. So dont fret. Get a Stacounter, that will reassure you that people are dropping by and reading! :)

confucius said...

@Silverine..

This was my condition when I was waiting for my first comment..:)

I will surely nominate ur poem...together we can be partners in crime...

Maybe I shld get a stat counter...may be that will reduce my artistic Heart Attack...;)

Ajith said...

Confusious, don't get confused, we all are with u...

I proved to myself tht my heart was not made of cement :)

confucius said...

@Ajith...

Not cement but concrete ;)

The one who has loved and lost said...

kalaakaarante prasava vedana alle...
birth pangs of an author :D

confucius said...

@Layman...

Athu thanne sadhanam...:)..Kalakaarante pettu novu..

mathew said...

very touching poem!!:-D
''Artistic Heart Attack ' hehe..you have coined a new term altogether!;-P

confucius said...

@mathew

Enikku kala ozhuki thudangiyaal pinne pidichaal kittilla ;)

Unknown said...

nice poem!

like silverline said add a stat counter.
but then sometimes that also wont work... then just keep refreshing the page....:D

confucius said...

@Abraham...

Thanks :)

sharika sneharaj said...

hey... i dunno kno u...chanced upon ur blog.....ur writing style is coool!!!
n i totally understand dis artistic heart attack...i'd call it heart ache though.....
CHEERS!!!

mirage said...

hahaha good poem!

Don't worry,here s a comment for comments'' sake:))


mirage:))